Hi Jian, I can guess what this is about but I would really like you to edit it and add some writing: * Explaining what the picture is about * How you felt when Mum & Dad told you about the move * How you felt packing up and saying goodbye * What you left behind * What you miss - friends, food, places etc * The good things about your new life in NZ * How you feel now you have been in NZ for almost 6 months. I'm looking forward to reading the edited post. Please email me when you have completed it.
Keep up the good work and remember to read as much as you can while you are not at school! Have you been using the Tamaki College Library?
Hi Jian,
ReplyDeleteI can guess what this is about but I would really like you to edit it and add some writing:
* Explaining what the picture is about
* How you felt when Mum & Dad told you about the move
* How you felt packing up and saying goodbye
* What you left behind
* What you miss - friends, food, places etc
* The good things about your new life in NZ
* How you feel now you have been in NZ for almost 6 months.
I'm looking forward to reading the edited post. Please email me when you have completed it.
Keep up the good work and remember to read as much as you can while you are not at school! Have you been using the Tamaki College Library?